10.11.2010

Hot Summer Nights

Okay all you trashy romance lovers, here is a snipet to get started! This is just a short one I wrote a while back. Enjoy! And let me know what you think! I may build on this story later on ;-)


Hot Summer Nights

It was a cool summer night as they made their way to the lake. Hot tension ripped across the truck like the warm summer night air blowing in through the windows. Every inch of their being was on fire. Neither talked. They knew exactly what would happen that starry night. There was no going back.

Finally, the tires of his truck roll to a stop at a secluded cove. The dark lake glistens in front of them, beckoning their bodies. They each strip slowly down to almost nothing and enter the water together…
The darkness of the lake surrounds them as the full moon shines brighter upon them. Still not touching, they inch closer and closer to each other. Finally, he grabs her hand under the water and pulls her slick, wet body hard upon his as she gasps in the shrill ecstasy of his touch. Her legs curl around his hips and her hands slowly make their way down the side of his face, along his shoulders, his chest, and inch even further down but yet, stopping where he is aching for her touch most. His hands begin to linger on her body also as he pulls her in for a lustful, passionate kiss; a kiss that ignites the exploding passion within them, turning their kisses wild and fierce.
His hands ripple down through the water exploring every inch of her, teasing with his mouth and every caress. Within seconds, they are on the beach…kissing, touching, stripping each other until their wet bodies touched only skin. He continues to ravage her body starting at her mouth; licking, kissing, touching every inch of her skin and then lower, to the center of her core…
   

2 comments:

  1. AHH This is so good. I can not wait for you to post others. It is a very intense snippet :)

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  2. Ooooh... Pretty good! I like it! I'm excited to read the next one! :)

    Just a side comment... (Because I'm an English nerd.) Make sure you keep your verb tenses the same. You started with past tense and then moved to present.

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